Improve wording in messages

flake-parts/lib.nix

@@ -11,8 +11,11 @@
 
     genAttrs = f: names: lib.genAttrs names f;
 
+    mkInvalidConfigMessage = subject: reason: "Invalid configuration for ${subject}: ${reason}.";
+
     mkUnprotectedMessage =
-      name: "${name} should only be exposed on private networks; access control isn't yet configured";
+      name:
+      self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage name "the service must use a private domain until access control is configured";
 
     relativePath = path: path |> toString |> lib.removePrefix "${self}/";
 

modules/home/services/ntfy-client.nix

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ in
     systemd.user.services.ntfy-client = {
       Install.WantedBy = [ "graphical-session.target" ];
       Unit = {
-        Description = "ntfy client subscriber";
+        Description = "ntfy client subscription";
         PartOf = [ "graphical-session.target" ];
         After = [ "graphical-session.target" ];
         X-Restart-Triggers = [ config.xdg.configFile."ntfy/client.yml".source ];

modules/home/sops.nix

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ in
         |> lib.attrNames
         |> lib.map (secretPath: {
           assertion = cfg.secretsData |> lib.hasAttrByPath (secretPath |> lib.splitString "/");
-          message = "Sops secret `${secretPath}` is used in a module but not defined in secrets.json";
+          message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "SOPS secret `${secretPath}`" "it is used in a module but not defined in `secrets.json`";
         })
       )
       ++ (
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ in
         |> lib.mapAttrsToListRecursive (path: _: path |> lib.concatStringsSep "/")
         |> lib.map (secretPath: {
           assertion = config.sops.secrets |> lib.hasAttr secretPath;
-          message = "Sops secret `${secretPath}` is defined in secrets.json but not used in any module";
+          message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "SOPS secret `${secretPath}`" "it is defined in `secrets.json` but not used in any module";
         })
       );
   };

modules/nixos/services/alloy.nix

@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 {
   config,
+  self,
   lib,
   allHosts,
   ...
@@ -38,7 +39,7 @@ in
       |> lib.filter (name: name != "system")
       |> lib.map (name: {
         assertion = cfg.collect.metrics.${name} -> config.services.${name}.enable;
-        message = "Alloy cannot collect `${name}` metrics without the `${name}` service";
+        message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "Alloy metric collection for `${name}`" "the `${name}` service is not enabled";
       });
 
     services.alloy = {

modules/nixos/services/caddy.nix

@@ -91,11 +91,11 @@ in
           |> lib.concatMap (vHost: [
             {
               assertion = (vHost.port == null) || (vHost.files == null);
-              message = "Caddy virtual host `${vHost.domain}` cannot set both `port` and `files`";
+              message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "Caddy virtual host `${vHost.domain}`" "`port` and `files` cannot be set at the same time";
             }
             {
               assertion = (vHost.port != null) || (vHost.files != null) || (vHost.extraConfig != null);
-              message = "Caddy virtual host `${vHost.domain}` must set at least one of `port`, `files` or `extraConfig`";
+              message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "Caddy virtual host `${vHost.domain}`" "one of `port`, `files` or `extraConfig` must be set";
             }
           ]);
 

modules/nixos/services/nebula/default.nix

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ in
   config = lib.mkIf cfg.enable {
     assertions = lib.singleton {
       assertion = netCfg.overlay.isLighthouse -> cfg.advertise.address != null;
-      message = "`${netCfg.hostName}` is a Nebula lighthouse, but `underlay.isPublic` or `overlay.advertise.address` are not set. Lighthouses must be publicly reachable.";
+      message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "Nebula lighthouse `${netCfg.hostName}`" "`underlay.isPublic` must be enabled or `services.nebula.advertise.address` must be set so the host is publicly reachable";
     };
 
     sops.secrets."nebula/host-key" = lib.mkIf (cfg.privateKeyFile == null) {

modules/nixos/services/prometheus.nix

@@ -96,10 +96,10 @@ in
                   expr = ''absent_over_time(up{instance="${hostName}", job="node"}[2m])'';
                   labels.severity = "critical";
                   annotations = {
-                    summary = "${hostName} is DOWN";
+                    summary = "Host ${hostName} is down";
-                    summary_resolved = "${hostName} is up again";
+                    summary_resolved = "Host ${hostName} is up again";
-                    description = "No metrics received for over 2 minutes.";
+                    description = "Prometheus has not received node metrics from ${hostName} for 2 minutes.";
-                    description_resolved = "Metrics are being received again.";
+                    description_resolved = "Prometheus is receiving node metrics from ${hostName} again.";
                   };
                 })
               )
@@ -109,20 +109,20 @@ in
                   expr = ''up{job=~"prometheus|alertmanager"} == 0'';
                   for = "2m";
                   annotations = {
-                    summary = "{{ $labels.job | title }} on {{ $labels.instance }} is DOWN";
+                    summary = "Service {{ $labels.job | title }} on {{ $labels.instance }} is down";
-                    summary_resolved = "{{ $labels.job | title }} on {{ $labels.instance }} is up again";
+                    summary_resolved = "Service {{ $labels.job | title }} on {{ $labels.instance }} is up again";
-                    description = "Unresponsive for over 2 minutes.";
+                    description = "Prometheus has not received scrape data for 2 minutes.";
-                    description_resolved = "Responding normally.";
+                    description_resolved = "Prometheus is receiving scrape data again.";
                   };
                 }
                 {
                   alert = "CominDeploymentFailed";
                   expr = ''comin_deployment_info{status!="done"}'';
                   annotations = {
-                    summary = "{{ $labels.instance }} deployment failed";
+                    summary = "Deployment on {{ $labels.instance }} failed";
-                    summary_resolved = "{{ $labels.instance }} deployment recovered";
+                    summary_resolved = "Deployment on {{ $labels.instance }} succeeded again";
-                    description = "Deployment is not reaching \"done\" status.";
+                    description = "Comin reports a deployment status other than \"done\".";
-                    description_resolved = "Deployment completed successfully.";
+                    description_resolved = "Comin reports the deployment status as \"done\" again.";
                   };
                 }
                 {
@@ -130,10 +130,10 @@ in
                   expr = "count(count by (commit_id) (comin_deployment_info)) > 1";
                   for = "10m";
                   annotations = {
-                    summary = "Hosts are running different commits";
+                    summary = "Deployment commits are out of sync";
-                    summary_resolved = "All hosts are running the same commit again";
+                    summary_resolved = "Deployment commits are in sync again";
-                    description = "Possibly a failed deployment or incompatible configurations.";
+                    description = "Comin reports different deployed commits across hosts.";
-                    description_resolved = "All hosts are in sync.";
+                    description_resolved = "Comin reports the same deployed commit across all hosts again.";
                   };
                 }
               ];

modules/nixos/services/restic/healthchecks.nix

@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ in
 
     systemd.services = {
       "healthcheck-ping@" = {
-        description = "Pings healthcheck (%i)";
+        description = "Ping Healthchecks for %i";
         serviceConfig.Type = "oneshot";
         scriptArgs = "%i";
         script = ''

modules/nixos/sops.nix

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ in
         |> lib.attrNames
         |> lib.map (secretPath: {
           assertion = cfg.secretsData |> lib.hasAttrByPath (secretPath |> lib.splitString "/");
-          message = "Sops secret `${secretPath}` is used in a module but not defined in secrets.json";
+          message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "SOPS secret `${secretPath}`" "it is used in a module but not defined in `secrets.json`";
         })
       )
       ++ (
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ in
         |> lib.mapAttrsToListRecursive (path: _: path |> lib.concatStringsSep "/")
         |> lib.map (secretPath: {
           assertion = config.sops.secrets |> lib.hasAttr secretPath;
-          message = "Sops secret `${secretPath}` is defined in secrets.json but not used in any module";
+          message = self.lib.mkInvalidConfigMessage "SOPS secret `${secretPath}`" "it is defined in `secrets.json` but not used in any module";
         })
       );
   };